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Sample: fictional names, nothing was sent
The redline · Merrivale Bluepine NDA

The tracked changes

3 of the 9 redlines, quoted exactly from the returned Word file. Struck through: the original wording. Underlined: the change.

The confidentiality term
seven (7) years→three (3) years
The window to return materials
within five (5) business days→within ten (10) business days
What counts as confidential
and whether or not marked, designated, or otherwise identified as confidential→and that is marked or identified as confidential at the time of disclosure
The returned Word file, tracked changes on, the firm’s positions beside it
The returned NDA open in Word with tracked changes: seven (7) years struck for three (3) years, and the firm’s positions beside it

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